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I think I'm gonna try making chapters longer. This one could actually be split into 2 if I wanted probably, but given how long the story is at this point, I wanna try and condense where I can. Might take a lil while longer for one to be done, but we'll see what happens.
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You really keep true to how the human mind works when it comes to emotions, and that makes your writing so realistic. It's true, anger doesn't stop the other emotions. They all just mix and make a mess. And I was wondering when Leadbury was gonna show his ugly mug, and yet I find myself so fond of such a dangerous creature. Maybe it's his attitude, but I love it.
And I really love Berenos's change in attitude over the course of this chapter. Ahh, male bonding.
I'm still really tense, though. Everything's going too smoothly and that makes me uncomfortable. Waiting for something bad to happen is like slowly pulling off a band-aid. >__<
And I really love Berenos's change in attitude over the course of this chapter. Ahh, male bonding.
I'm still really tense, though. Everything's going too smoothly and that makes me uncomfortable. Waiting for something bad to happen is like slowly pulling off a band-aid. >__<